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Sunday, 16 October 2011

Breathless.

In a childlike bewilderment, she marvelled upon his unlikeness.

Unlikeness from the rest of the empty people in the room.

The rest of the people with their baggage and weird proclivity.


But, him.

He was just.. something else.

A refreshing modification to her otherwise monotonous life who gave her enough reasons to beam about.

A smile breaks thus, on seeing how effortlessly he would be swallowed up into the crowd and yet emerge distinctly.

The more she scrutinized him for signs of deficiency, the more he would surprise her.

And, they shared laughs. Lots of them.

And, some stories.

And, suddenly the emptiness in the bottom drawer began to fade.





13 comments:

Nia Charms said...

In a childlike bewilderment, she marvelled upon his unlikeness.
Unlikeness from the rest of the empty people in the room.
The rest of the people with their baggage and weird proclivity.


These lines just four of them but said loads. Its surprising how you explained a whole story in such a short post.

Plus welcome back.

MangoMan said...

Teenage nostalgia. The blog, the post. :)

Red Handed said...

How some people touch ur lives in way noone ever could. How a particular someone effortlessly occupy a big share f ur heart.

Lovely lines!

Rahul Bhatia said...

Very well written! Liked it

confused soul said...

Truly beautiful...loved every bit...you have a way with words, which I absolutely love :) ♥

sriramnivas said...

Sometimes our heart falls for uniqueness but not for beauty. That's why we say love is blind and it has its own course to take.
well written lines and thanks for sharing ur thoughts with us.

From: sriramnivas.wordpress.com

Isha said...

The last line was brilliant. :)

Disha said...

:)
I wish it were like that every time for me too.

Soumi said...

So beautiful!I wonder how many times I'll have to read it to get sick of it.Wow,I just found a new definition of infinity!

Sonshu said...

First thing, YOU blogged after such a long time. <3
Ha! :)
And this is so damn awesome.
You know you should write more often?
Gosh...so deep and well written and flawless.

POLO. meri behena :) *Proud look*

Poulomi said...

Neha : :)

MangoMan : Nostalgia is a crazy thing. :)

Red Handed. So true. Thankyou. :)

Poulomi said...

Rahul Bhatia : Glad you did. :)

Confused Soul : You. Thankyou :*

Sriramnivas : Thankyou.

Poulomi said...

Isha : :)

Disha : I hope it is. :)

Soumi : I love you.

Sonshu : :*

 
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